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revision99 » Blog Archive » Promised Land, Chapter 1 — Sat, 18 Feb 2006 19:14:03 +0000

[...] …continued from here. The story starts here. [...]

By: theresa

theresa — Wed, 27 Apr 2005 03:52:00 +0000

Larry, I’ve been absent far too long. Look what I almost missed ot on! This is really great.

The thing I like about it is the character’s attitude of absolute optimism while in the midst of a physical scene of hell on earth. This kid is so determined that things are going to get better in the “Promised Land” that he ignores and denies anything to the contrary.

By: Larry Jones

Larry Jones — Tue, 26 Apr 2005 04:16:00 +0000

Kris – Look, I had nothing to do with the show incident. It was your dream.

L & Slink – May I call you Slink? Let’s talk some more about you both loving my picture.

By: Slinky

Slinky — Mon, 25 Apr 2005 06:14:00 +0000

I have to agree with L, I love the new picture.

By: L

Mon, 25 Apr 2005 01:00:00 +0000

forgot to tell you — love the new pic

By: Kris

Kris — Sun, 24 Apr 2005 03:26:00 +0000

I was going to try to qualify that last statement and realized that I just can’t.

I’m looking forward to the next installment.

By: Kris

Kris — Sun, 24 Apr 2005 03:24:00 +0000

Ahh, ok. That makes me feel better about losing my shoes, anyway.

By: Larry Jones

Larry Jones — Sun, 24 Apr 2005 00:07:00 +0000

-G.D. – Thank you. Ma’am. May I have another?

Kris – I’m not threatening. I’m really trying to write the next chapter this weekend. This will not be the Great American Novel, by the way. I already attempted that, and it’s too hard.

By: Kris

Kris — Sun, 24 Apr 2005 00:00:00 +0000

Your threat of not finishing it has made me not lurk. You have to finish this one, it’s the best one yet.

By: -G.D.

-G.D. — Sat, 23 Apr 2005 19:13:00 +0000

OK…I think it sucked.

Just kidding. I really did like it.