Comments on: The Deal I Made http://revision99.com/2005/08/23/the-deal-i-made/ Harshing your mellow since 2004. Sun, 30 Oct 2011 19:38:07 -0400 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.5 hourly 1 By: Larry Jones http://revision99.com/2005/08/23/the-deal-i-made/comment-page-1/#comment-1309 Larry Jones Thu, 25 Aug 2005 14:24:00 +0000 http://revision99.com/2005/08/23/the-deal-i-made/#comment-1309 T1 - I'm all about the ambiguity. And the body parts. Slink! - You must have caught me lurking. But I don't bite. Hard. T1 – I’m all about the ambiguity. And the body parts.

Slink! – You must have caught me lurking. But I don’t bite. Hard.

]]> By: The Slinky Cat http://revision99.com/2005/08/23/the-deal-i-made/comment-page-1/#comment-1308 The Slinky Cat Thu, 25 Aug 2005 10:55:00 +0000 http://revision99.com/2005/08/23/the-deal-i-made/#comment-1308 Mr. Jones, that was fabulous. Concise with a lovely, sharp bite right at the end. Slinky like. Mr. Jones, that was fabulous. Concise with a lovely, sharp bite right at the end. Slinky like.

]]> By: tacit1 http://revision99.com/2005/08/23/the-deal-i-made/comment-page-1/#comment-1307 tacit1 Thu, 25 Aug 2005 09:28:00 +0000 http://revision99.com/2005/08/23/the-deal-i-made/#comment-1307 "the empty elevator shaft. I like the double ambiguous meaning that I gathered from that. Like 2 sudden realizations at once. “the empty elevator shaft.

I like the double ambiguous meaning that I gathered from that.
Like 2 sudden realizations at once.

]]> By: Larry Jones http://revision99.com/2005/08/23/the-deal-i-made/comment-page-1/#comment-1306 Larry Jones Thu, 25 Aug 2005 02:02:00 +0000 http://revision99.com/2005/08/23/the-deal-i-made/#comment-1306 Cryptic - Welcome! If you close the deal, you'll have a great time. Just be careful. Jack - I'll say what I want until I get too many flags. Glad you liked it. L - Too funny? <I>Moi?</I> Cryptic – Welcome! If you close the deal, you’ll have a great time. Just be careful.

Jack – I’ll say what I want until I get too many flags. Glad you liked it.

L – Too funny? Moi?

]]> By: L http://revision99.com/2005/08/23/the-deal-i-made/comment-page-1/#comment-1305 L Wed, 24 Aug 2005 23:42:00 +0000 http://revision99.com/2005/08/23/the-deal-i-made/#comment-1305 too funny, and quite snarky :) too funny, and quite snarky :)

]]> By: Drink More Jack http://revision99.com/2005/08/23/the-deal-i-made/comment-page-1/#comment-1304 Drink More Jack Wed, 24 Aug 2005 22:14:00 +0000 http://revision99.com/2005/08/23/the-deal-i-made/#comment-1304 I am always a sucker for the "shorts" whether it be in the film or writing variations. Say what you want, I liked it. I am always a sucker for the “shorts” whether it be in the film or writing variations. Say what you want, I liked it.

]]> By: Cryptic http://revision99.com/2005/08/23/the-deal-i-made/comment-page-1/#comment-1303 Cryptic Wed, 24 Aug 2005 20:56:00 +0000 http://revision99.com/2005/08/23/the-deal-i-made/#comment-1303 Nooo Larry, that is waaaay to harsh on yourself. That was a well written, quick, quirky new take on a dusty oldie. I enjoyed it. I liked it. I wanted to sell my soul for the money and the girls! :D Nice writing. Nooo Larry, that is waaaay to harsh on yourself. That was a well written, quick, quirky new take on a dusty oldie.
I enjoyed it. I liked it. I wanted to sell my soul for the money and the girls! :D

Nice writing.

]]> By: Larry Jones http://revision99.com/2005/08/23/the-deal-i-made/comment-page-1/#comment-1302 Larry Jones Wed, 24 Aug 2005 17:30:00 +0000 http://revision99.com/2005/08/23/the-deal-i-made/#comment-1302 To The Precious Few above - I am aware that this is a cheap, half-assed version of the legend, carelessly assembled and relying overmuch on the hope that everyone already knew the story, and I thank you all for overlooking this. I owe you all better, and I have excellent intentions, but as you know blogging is blogging, and it can lead to these kinds of bare-bones sketches. In other words, I was too tired to sleep and too wide awake to think. As always, your kindness fires my fevered heart. To The Precious Few above – I am aware that this is a cheap, half-assed version of the legend, carelessly assembled and relying overmuch on the hope that everyone already knew the story, and I thank you all for overlooking this. I owe you all better, and I have excellent intentions, but as you know blogging is blogging, and it can lead to these kinds of bare-bones sketches. In other words, I was too tired to sleep and too wide awake to think.

As always, your kindness fires my fevered heart.

]]> By: molly http://revision99.com/2005/08/23/the-deal-i-made/comment-page-1/#comment-1301 molly Wed, 24 Aug 2005 13:14:00 +0000 http://revision99.com/2005/08/23/the-deal-i-made/#comment-1301 I like the beginning better than the end. But I usually like the beginning better than the end. I like the beginning better than the end. But I usually like the beginning better than the end.

]]> By: theresa http://revision99.com/2005/08/23/the-deal-i-made/comment-page-1/#comment-1300 theresa Wed, 24 Aug 2005 11:32:00 +0000 http://revision99.com/2005/08/23/the-deal-i-made/#comment-1300 You got a style I absolutely Love! Can I play one of the twins? You got a style I absolutely Love!

Can I play one of the twins?

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